Tyler Wilston and Jenny Macking :) With a new friend on a journey to fulfill the only human’s bucket list in the land of Ooo, will his bestfriend lose his lover along the way?
I agree with Trina, the wording needs to be fixed but the logline is very interesting and it makes me want to read on! The logline clearly tells what could happen in the story, good job!
Whats on the bucketlist?! What is this land!? Sounds interesting!
ReplyDeleteSounds interesting but the wording is kind of confusing and not grammatically correct. Its a really cool idea though! Just revise the logline.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Trina, the wording needs to be fixed but the logline is very interesting and it makes me want to read on! The logline clearly tells what could happen in the story, good job!
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