Changed baby's diaper; changed mom's too.
I liked this one a lot. It gave the emotion of the hardships of having children. Not only that, but it also portrayed how you're a kid twice and an adult once. It was short and to the point but showed how this woman is taking on two roles.
He wrote love on my arm.
I liked this one a lot in particular. I felt the love that I have with my boyfriend Tyler. We “wrote love” on eachothers arms. We both went through depression and have hope and hope to give hope to other people that it will be ok.
My suicide note is 759 pages.
There was a hardship that just made my heart drop for this person. They’ve had to have a lot of deep hurt feelings in order to be able to write that much about wanting to die. There is a lot of build-up that people accumulate and it’s sad.
Write it... Crumple it.... swallow it....
This one made me think of someone who always wanted to say what they were feeling. However they always ended up totally getting rid of the idea and demolishing it. It was very powerful, and accentuated by the punctuation.
Grow up? Had too. Mom died.
Growing up is something that at times people are forced into. At any age events are presented which it is necessary to step up to the plate. To me it seemed like this person had to grow up after the tragic event of the loss of their mother.
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