Opening Scene
The episode begins with Finn and Jake walking through the woods in the land of Ooo. Finn asks Jake about the meaning of their lives and the scene snaps to a flashback of the first television episode of Adventure Time where Finn has his bucket list written on his arm, something about slaying goblins and fighting evil. It snaps back to the present where Finn looks like he's just had an out-of-body-experience and Jake makes an intelligent comment, and turns it into a stupid comment as he always does. They see a strange, mysterious being that turns out to be a Vampire-Unicorn-Pegasus. Suddenly there is a zoom in on her heel and she trips over a small pebble in the grass. She trips and falls rolling into the trees. Finn yells "Shmowzow! Jake we gotta help!" Jake: "Eh, I'm fat." Then Finn grabs Jake's arm and they’re off into the forest to get her. The scene will then cut to a view behind them, peaking out of the bushes to see a black Vampire-Unicorn-Pegasus with cuts and scrapes all over it. Jake and Finn look at each other and Jake says in a mind-blown way "Finn that's a V.U.P, there was said to only be one in the world." Upon hearing voices the V.U.P cries out for help in Spanish “AYUDAME!”
The Big Decision
In the story line the “Big Decision” will be the one made by Jake when it turns four-o’clock (his head rings like an alarm clock changing shape). This interrupts the montage and makes Jake pause to go to the jam session he always has with Lady Rainicorn. However he decides to continue adventuring with Finn and his new buddy VUP not realizing the consequences that may occur in the future for these actions. Meanwhile Lady Rainicorn waits upon the roof in which they always jam on. She realizes after a time lapse that Jake will not be attending and she goes to see Bubblegum Princess.
The “All is Lost Moment”
Finn knows that VUP is from the Nightosphere, but he doesn’t know what to do about it. He realizes that she is pure evil and toying with Jake. She’s trying to ruin his relationship with Lady Rainicorn. Finn has tried telling Jake but hasn’t been able to because he sees how close he is to VUP. Jake might think Finn is jealous. Finn goes to Marceline and asks her what he should do. She says that it isn’t easy but he has to if he really loves his friend, even if it could hurt him. She told Finn that due to her powerful dad from the Nightosphere (The Lord of Evil) she is capable of sending VUP into the Nightosphere and to not be able to return. Finn and Marceline make a Pro Con list on Marceline’s white board (the white board has I<3LSP on it and a picture of LSP).
This sounds really great! I like how detailed and developed this already sounds. It seems that you already have your whole story writen and this is just the summary! (which is good) Good job:)
ReplyDeleteThe story is definitely well developed! This has alot of detail and is well written. The opening scene is very nice!
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